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Poem: Pure Petrarchian love sonnet (730)
Rhyme structure: ABBA, ABBA, CDC and CDC, according to Wyatt’s structure fixed in the Sixteenth century.
Lines used: decasyllables, according to Surrey’s structure fixed in the Sixteenth century.
Vertical acrostic: Refined Rebecca (730).
Theme: mystic love.
Content: exclusively platonic and thoroughly spiritual.
REFINED REBECCA (730)
1. Rose of my sweet heart, I worship you,
2. Ethereal swan, I think of you day and night,
3. Fine emerald, I would swoon at your sight,
4. Ivory Calliope, I am sighing for you.
5. Naiad, without your love I am feeling blue,
6. Echo, I adore you with all my human might,
7. Divine, in heaven you will be my delight,
8. Red ruby, I am cutting my veins for you.
9. Even though I am now meaningless to you,
10. Bright pearl, I could be useful tomorrow,
11. Eburnean Venus, with you I will soon flee.
12. Chaste Diana, your holy, immaculate heart I see,
13. Candid Leda, please do not live in sorrow,
14. Aphrodite, in heaven I will forever marry thee.
Yours faithfully and eternally
Massimo Bandini
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