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I have recently composed a Petrarchian love sonnet in honour of the perfect, sublime and divine Goddess Rebecca Romijn Stamos.
I have been rejected by a cruel, pitiless woman whom I love endlessly, immensely and eternally and I am thoroughly destroyed.
This is the reason why I decided to express my immense actual love to Rebecca. As far as she is concerned, I have always loved her endlessly, immensely and eternally and, above all, platonically. She is an intangible angel to me.
Please consider that the rhyme is ABBA, ABBA, CDC and CDC and note
the ten decasyllables per line. There is a difficult vertical
acrostic: "O, Rebecca Romijn" which gives the title to the sonnet.
I am a bit sad cause she will never read this pure sonnet, the highest expression of pure, endless, immense and eternal love.
Title: O, Rebecca Romijn
1. Outstanding Venus, you own my pure, sweet heart,
2. Red rose, I also loved you, angel, in the past,
3. Eternal Athena, a bad dart Cupid cast,
4. Bright Clio, I praise you with the noblest art.
5. Elect soul, my heart is bleeding for a dart,
6. Charming Diana, I am working at full blast,
7. Chaste Calliope, my love will forever last,
8. Adorable angel, of your royal soul I make part.
9. Ruby, if I had wings I would fly to you,
10. Oh, Daphne, of my eyes you are the bright light,
11. My holy queen, believe me, my love is true.
12. Ivory Clio, my endless love is old, not new,
13. Juvenile, I love you with all my might,
14. Noble Aphrodite, every hour I die for you.
Faithfully yours
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